There’s a new query trend out there, one that isn’t helping authors at all, but is driving me crazy.
Here is how the query goes:
Dear Ms. Faust, After seeing on #MSWL that you’ve been looking for books set in Alaska I knew I had to query you. My book is called Alaskan Cool Guy. The book is about a guy who finds himself alone in the Alaskan Bush after a freak snowstorm downs his plane. Everyone dies. It’s truly horrific. Now he must get out all by himself, with only a scissors and an old seat cover as a jacket. ****please note I made up this horrible blurb on purpose —jhf
I have included a brief synopsis and bio below. I hope you like it enough to ask for more. Many thanks,Jessica Author Brief Synopsis: When Frank Franklin’s plane crashes in the Alaskan Bush in the middle of Winter, this self-described Whiz Kid finds himself in a situation he never imagined. Lost in a country few could survive with only the remnants of a broken plane for tools, Frank sets out to face what the wild throws at him. At first he’s fighting only Mother Nature, but after finding the dead body of what looks like a hunter, Frank starts to wonder if the Grizzlies aren’t the least of his concerns. Finally he makes it to safety, changed for the better.
Jessica Author has been writing since she was 12. It’s been a dream of hers to be published. Born in Alaska, she has a strong desire to bring this beautiful country to life for readers.
Okay, here’s the problem, besides the fact that your synopsis isn’t very good, it’s buried. Why would you include the blurb for your book after your letter? I’m already done reading. It’s like sending a cover letter and saying, “P.S. Here are the skills that make me best suited for the job”
Query letters should look something like this:
Opening introductory paragraph
That’s it. Don’t over complicate it.
I’ve done a ton of blog posts on how to write a proper query letter. Query Shark is an excellent source of information. Use them.