These are actual details from query letters that ultimately caused me to reject the query almost immediately. To me these are red flags, or obvious signs that either the work isn’t ready or the author and I are not compatible.
I have written three books and three screenplays in the past three months.
My thought: written, but not edited or revised
I am writing this book to promote my website and business.
My thought: I would like you to think of the book as a business separate from your other work. It’s also just not that easy.
We are not interested in a contract that does not provide an advance something on the order of six figures.
My thought: While it’s admirable to have high hopes, this particular genre is not going to garner that type of advance for a debut author, and I do not want to waste my time working with an author who is likely to turn down any other offer we get.