#AskAgent – “Is it okay to make your YA protagonist 14 years old?”

  • By: admin | Date: Jun 27 2018

“I have a question for you! Is it okay to make your YA protagonist 14 years old? I’ve been given conflicting answers to this question. One agent said I should age my protagonist up to 15 because it’s really hard to sell a 14 y.o. YA protag. Another agent told me that I should write what I want to write and not listen to the first agent! I’d love some guidance here. Thank you!”

Naomi Davis here!

This topic is always one of my favorites to discuss. Should your YA character be 14 or 16? 18? 13?

Just like actually being a teenager, it’s messy, twisty, and complicated! Striking the perfect balance of voice and plot in Young Adult literature is a particular challenge because teenagers (and their use of language) change so rapidly it’s hard for any industry to keep up. Most industry people are, after all, adults, and ask any teenager or parent you know and you’ll likely be told that adults do not understand teenagers. But there are methods of writing that make a book accessible to teenagers, that allow them to forget about the adult behind the keyboard and just enjoy the teen storyline. A big (but not the only) part of this is character age.

Most readers like to read “up” in age. A 6-year-old who has just learned they can read more strongly than their peers may tackle chapter books somewhat beyond their comprehension, just to prove they can do it, and grow as a reader in the process. A 12-year-old likely wants to read adventures from the point of view of a 15-year-old, partially in preparation for the social situations they’ll encounter at that age and the relationships they hope they’ll have. And once that child feels they are closer to an adult than a child, they likely want to read stories that show characters who behave more as adults than children, often with fewer restrictions on them than they have in real life – again, in preparation for experiencing the independence they crave.

So a 14-year-old protagonist can be a YA protagonist, yes, but because they appeal to a younger teen (or pre-teen) reader, they could also be the star of a Middle Grade book. 14 is a borderline age – on the younger end of Teen and on the older end of Child. It’s important to ask yourself: at what age will this character be best received by it’s target audience?

Whether your book fits into Young Adult or Middle Grade largely depends on how the story is executed and what kind of reader will relate to this story more. We can narrow this down a little bit by relying on what we do know about teenagers that seems to remain a constant while other factors in this market shift so rapidly.

Does the main character take a lot of advice from teachers, parents, or other mentor figures? Do they rely on “home” more than friends for comfort at the end of a challenging day? Do they accept and engage with the “impossible” things that occur in their world, rather than questioning the possibility of them and searching for proof? Are they more excited about these things than skeptical? Do they have a strong group of friends who are not yet experiencing the divisive nature of hormones and their role in shaking the foundation of those friendships? Are they still afraid of the consequences adults will impose upon them for getting into trouble? Are they awkward in their puberty, rather than proud of the adult body they are beginning to wield?

If that sounds like your 14-year-old character, then they are probably the star of a Middle Grade book.

If, instead, this character rejects advice from adult authority figures, relies on their friends more than home for support, is skeptical and demanding of proof in the face of “impossible” events, and is exploring the way friendships shake and morph as their body tells them they are more an adult than a child, and makes their decisions without fear of consequences imposed by adults… then they are probably the star of a Young Adult book, instead. And perhaps you should think about whether their story would be most dynamically told if they were 15/16, fully rooted in teenage drama, rather than teetering on that 13/14-year-old cusp.

Some publishers will ask this character to be aged up due to a variety of factors, such as who they know is already reading similar books in their lineup and what readership they hope to aim the book toward. Others will feel differently. An age is something really easy to address in revisions, if the rest of the story puzzle pieces line up just right. And children are all different, living different lives at their own unique stages of development/independence, so this isn’t set in stone. There are many other factors in shaping a story more to one age bracket than the other, such as language, plot, romance focus (middle grade readers still somewhat think love interest is eeewwwwy, or at least say they do and wouldn’t be caught dead reading it even if they secretly adore a good romance, so it sometimes works better nestled subtly into the story, rather than a front-and-center feature of it), and existing market trends.

What if your character is not clearly one or the other of these?

I’m not the firm authority on these blurry lines between age brackets of YA and MG. I’m an agent who loves to read YA, a writer who tinkers with writing it, and the mom of some creative and unruly pre-teens who prove me wrong on everything I ever thought I knew about raising kids on a daily basis. I also once was a Young Adult myself, just as you were, and I try to remember what reading was like for me, back then.

But in general, if your character and his story seem to relate more to one of these groups than the other, perhaps that’s the better direction to shape your story to make it appeal more widely to readers of that age range. The last thing you want is a YA reader picking up your YA book and thinking it’s too babyish (sometimes age alone is indeed enough to trigger this response), or a MG reader picking up your MG book and being unable to relate to the character who is “too adult” for their experience. So think about what your reader is actually experiencing and hoping to experience in real life, and make sure that your protagonist – whatever her age – is someone who can hang out with that preteen/teen and relate to their life, too, helping them navigate the mucky, complicated amazingness that is growing up.

19 responses to “#AskAgent – “Is it okay to make your YA protagonist 14 years old?””

  1. Avatar Doreen Robinson says:

    This was super informative, as I have been wrestling with this exact dilemma in my WIP! I am rethinking my protagonist’s age and the target audience based on your information. Thank you!

  2. Avatar AJ Blythe says:

    Naomi, I don’t write either MG or YA, but this was a fabulous explanation. I’ve always wondered exactly how to find the line in the sand, but it’s much clearer now. I’m going to share a link to this post to some of my YA and MG writer friends. Thank you.

  3. That age is a tricky one. Thank you for listing the difference between the MG and YA 14-yr-olds, because I know it can be hard to tell which category they are in sometimes. Personally I would go right to MG at that age, but if the MC is mature enough, she might be ready for a YA audience. It really does depend on the actions and attitude of the MC, as well as the material being presented.

  4. Avatar Stacy Nockowitz says:

    This was my #askagent question! Thank you for addressing it so thoughtfully. The more I think about my story, the more I feel it’s a MG novel. I’m aging my 14-year-old down to 13. Your post was incredibly helpful!

  5. Avatar Jack Scoltock says:

    My six book series- Mushroom, has a boy who ages from ten to twelve.
    I am looking for an agent for this series.

  6. Well done, Naomi! What a great explanation! I have never seen an answer on this subject that hit the nail on the head, but I think this article comes as close as possible. Great job, and I will be pointing people to the article as they ask me. (I am an ex-agent and current author consultant.)

  7. Avatar Rita Monette says:

    Love your explanation of the line between MG and YA character. I’ve struggled with this in my WIP for a while now. I’ve decided my 14-year-old protag is more middle grade than young adult. Thanks a lot.

  8. Avatar Stacey says:

    I have a somewhat related #askagent question for the Bookends Jr. team about word counts for these categories. When reading writer’s blogs, we are always encouraged to trim, and keep word counts low, particularly for MG, between 30,000-55,000 at most.

    But, When looking at the NYT middle grade Bestseller list (Aug. 5, 2018), most, if not all of the top ten are well over this limit (according to ReadingLength.com).

    Examples – Wonder – 70,000
    Wishtree – 68,000
    Hello, Universe – 97,000
    Willa of the Wood – 117,000
    Refugee – 107, 000

    Would you be able to give some insight into what is the real range? Perhaps the word counts increase during edits? I know decisions aren’t based solely on word count, but what range should a yet-to-be-published author be aiming for (specifically for an upper MG story) as to not raise any red flags when querying? Thanks so much.

  9. Avatar Em Elizabeth says:

    This article provided an excellent explanation of how to market a fourteen-year-old who rides the line of MG and YA. I’ve read articles on target age, but they never addressed this issue. This one helped me realize that my fourteen-year-old POVC is more of a Middle-Grade fourteen-year-old. However, I still have a little problem: my book has another POVC, and she’s twenty-three! Also, while my book is far from complete, I can already tell that my word count is going to soar past the traditional Middle Grade guidelines. I genuinely can’t tell if I’m writing a Middle Grade book, a Young Adult book, or something else entirely. Any advice?

    • There are also plenty of adult books that feature young protagonists. To be honest, so much of it comes down to voice and not just a character’s age. Do you have a YA, MG or adult voice? That will likely be a stronger determining factor in where your book belongs.

      • Avatar Em Elizabeth says:

        Thanks. 🙂 I’ve been told that my voice sounds MG, but that was only by one person. I think I’ll finish the book, then ask a few more people what age they think it fits best. Then I’ll figure out where to go from there.

  10. Avatar Reesa says:

    My MC protagonist is thirteen, and I was advised by a former agent to make it MG horror. Does the age of other characters matter? 13-15 range?

    My MG horror has fantasy in it now.
    Is MG horror fantasy a genre?

    Thank you!

    • Avatar James McGowan says:

      Middle grade is more than just changing your characters age — you’d need to make sure the character is in situations suitable for middle grade, that the voice reads more middle grade. And yes, you’d definitely want to see other characters in the same age range as well.

      MG Horror is a genre (and horror and fantasy have a lot of overlap.) Does it lean more towards either or?

      • Avatar Alice says:

        What about an 18 or 19 year old protagonist with a 16 year old friend (strictly platonic)?